There is jargon that is sometimes difficult to keep track of and I found it difficult at times to form a mental picture of what was happening in the battle scenes. The little bit of romance seems cheesy and almost forced and honestly could have just as easily been removed and it would be less distracting.
Overall thought, the read wasn't terrible. I couldn't recommend it to someone else, but there are worst ways to spend your time if you happen across the book.
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