This was an interesting story concept, but unfortunately the editing took me away from that. There were a lot of errors regarding punctuation, paragraph breaks, and dialogue formatting. There was also a pretty big inconsistency in one important scene that I wish was fixed. The ending was a little rushed as well, which made it hard to follow. If this book were re-edited, I would give it another try because I think the story was that strong. I can also see it as a short film, like something from “The Theatre Bizarre”.